Im glad you kept writing lyrics. your indie songs still impress me even after hearing the first one you posted.
Thank you so much! I'm so sorry I've been slacking as of lately. I've been unmusical. =(
this is just awesome.
Thanks a whole lot! :D
always great lyrics
Youre lyrics are always awesome. You really got down the emotion in this song, and I know cus ive been there. the only qualm i had, was that there didnt seem to be as much of a flow in the musical part as you usually have. usually your music fits together so well, and i felt that this was a little unrefined.
I understand what you mean! And I really appreciate the little fan base that I have. Thank you! :D
this is great!
I'm sorry i didn't notice this before i wrote the review on the earlier version of this song. =p
this was MUCH better and kept me intrigued the entire time. =D
wheres the climax?
this song is amazing, the only problem i have with it, is that the entire thing feels like it is leading up to a climax that isnt really there. i kept expecting some crazy downbeat or something, and it just wasnt there. as for the rest of the song though, awesome work. =]
has great potential!
I really like the first half of the song, but then around 2:00 it starts to get a little odd. the start feels like it is going to be this epic song that could almost be used in a movie. i think the last half of the song would benefit from some more low tones and some more extension on some of the notes. it is a good start to something that could be incredible, it just needs more. =]
I really like the story behind this song, and i also actually really like the raw sound of your voice. my only thing, is the flow of the chords. other then that its awesome!
thanks a lot! :)
love this mix. i used it in my linerider level i created. check it out and tell me what you think. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7933cX 02YiM
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